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-——记高二英语读后续写竞赛
发布时间:2021-04-14作者:供稿:高中英语组点击数:85

读后续写是高考综合改革试验省份高考英语试卷写作题第二节。题目提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。短文的评分,将会考虑续写部分与所给短文的衔接程度、内容完整性、应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性准确性,以及上下文的连贯性。此题型对学生的阅读理解能力和写作能力均有较高的要求。对于一直以来都以训练应用文写作的高中学生来说,这种记叙文的写作是一次极大的挑战。为了提高学生对读后续写的学习兴趣,检验前阶段写作训练的成效,高二英语备课组以2021年广州市一模英语试题里的读后续写为题,在年级范围内进行了一次读后续写比赛,限时30分钟,完成一篇读后续写的作文。比赛题目如下:  

It took place in a teachers family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school, when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off. What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mother's favorite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.

As the mother herself dusted the vase every day, she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹) that evening. To her surprise, the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase. Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbor’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no matter how hard he tried.

It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was quite clear that her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned. However, in the face of her son’s nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members. Ben’s mother remained calm. She realized she shouldn’t just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.

Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to the study at once. The boy thought he would now be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.

In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mothers face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter, she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.





 

一千个人眼中有一千个哈姆雷特。同学们认真阅读原文,充分发挥自己的想象力,为原文的后半段进行了各种精彩续写。在这次写作里,同学们人人都是作家,个个都有属于自己的故事。评委老师们常为同学们敏捷的才思和有趣的故事情节暗暗喝彩。经过评委们仔细认真的评判,全年级一共有40位同学在比赛中获奖。部分作品也在中庭进行展出。


 




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